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I would like to begin by blessing Denise's blog for several reasons. Firstly, I thought Denise did a wonderful job at incorporating word choice into her blog. I liked how Denise personalized her blog by including her own prior experiences with descriptive writing and why she had challenges when including it into her writing. Secondly, I thought Denise did a wonderful job at including her readings to prove her argument which was the importance of descriptive language. Denise referenced Tompkins to talk about the five techniques she could use to make her own improvements to descriptive writing. Lastly, Denise incorporated visuals to aid in her writing and help the reader understand her point.Address
In Denise's blog, she includes pictures of books that can be used to teach descriptive writing. Denise mentions each book and how they could be used as mentor texts in a classroom. I would like to know how Denise would use these particular books in a classroom setting in order to teach descriptive writing, and I am curious why Denise decided to talk about these books specifically. I really enjoyed how she included specific examples of mentor texts for descriptive writing, so I would love to learn more about how Denise might incorporate these texts in a classroom or if she has any personal connections to these texts.
Hicks (2013) states, "What is compelling about presentations as a digital writing tool is that so many other forms of media and composition can come into play". I thought Denise did a great job at using digital writing to establish the purpose of her blog which was to talk about the importance of descriptive writing.
References
Hicks,
T. (2013). Crafting digital writing. Portsmouth,
NH: Heinemann.
Tompkins,
G. E. (2019). Teaching
writing: Balancing process and product (7th
ed.). UpperSaddle River, NJ:
Merrill.
Like you mention regarding Denise's reflections, I too am left wanting to hear more about *your thinking* as you considered your questions for Denise. How would you use mentor texts when teaching descriptive writing? Which books would you want to use with kindergarten students?
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